this is my teachers conclusion I was impressed by your r

this is my teacher’s conclusion :’I was impressed by your reading of Woolf in the first half of your essay–I thought your commentary (on how women had few options in life because they were barred from getting an education) was nicely developed alongside support from the texts.It seems to me, however, that more care was taken in presenting the authors’ ideas in the first half of your essay than in the second half. The final two pages, where you consider similarities and differences and sum up the authors’ messages, don’t add much to your analysis. Some of the authors’ points are not accurately represented, and some of the nuances in their views are glossed over.’ Can you improve my essay a bit to a higher level.